Tuesday, August 15, 2006

海  一望無際
朝陽為它的蔚藍披上了层层金缕衣  閃閃迷人
海  與天相連
寛廣得讓人摸不清邊界
站在海岸上  方能感慨人是多麼地渺小  世界何其大
海  與風為友  皆與風為敌
當它們結伴同行時  地平線上偶爾掀起涟漪
舒服得讓人想投入其怀抱中
當它們相互斗争時  浪濤卻汹涌得難以平息
驚險得讓人寸步不敢靠近
蕴藏在海平面的另一端是珊瑚礁
傳說中有漂亮的人魚和無穷的宝藏待人發掘
我愛看海  看它的千變万化  感受它的溫和與澎湃
然後如詩人般  用心來記錄下當時的感触...

12 comments:

西門吹水 said...

2 writers here like to write poem :)

Anonymous said...

and only one writer here likes to 吹水 :)

云之彼端●祥龙翱翔 said...

hehe... what a funny group... :)

云之彼端●祥龙翱翔 said...

你这个诗写得不错啊。
读了让我有个很舒服的感觉。与海长伴。

yuki said...

謝謝云之彼端●祥龙翱翔的赞赏 ,也很開心听到你的共鸣,但我觉得自己还有好大的进步空间,需要再加把劲罗!

yuki said...

"writing poem" or "吹水"也是一种個人特色嘛!

西門吹水 said...

or maybe "writing poem" is a pretty way to "吹水"? :)

土下染蓝的种子 said...

Your Mandarin standard is still very good! Honestly, I cant write poems now.
Continue writing more poems! I enjoy reading it!:)

yuki said...

Thanks for ur kindly support.Because of this comment,i will give my self more try continuously in next time!^^

長空無極 said...

What a nice peom!!! It makes me feel comfortable and feel like myself is beside the sea after reading!

yuki said...

it's my 1st time to receive 長空無極comment here, thanks for your appreciate, I will work more hard ^0^

長空無極 said...

yuki, thx for ur appreciate also.
haha...now only i know i m the person who never post comment.....
i also will work hard.....