海
海 一望無際
朝陽為它的蔚藍披上了层层金缕衣 閃閃迷人
海 與天相連
寛廣得讓人摸不清邊界
站在海岸上 方能感慨人是多麼地渺小 世界何其大
海 與風為友 皆與風為敌
當它們結伴同行時 地平線上偶爾掀起涟漪
舒服得讓人想投入其怀抱中
當它們相互斗争時 浪濤卻汹涌得難以平息
驚險得讓人寸步不敢靠近
蕴藏在海平面的另一端是珊瑚礁
傳說中有漂亮的人魚和無穷的宝藏待人發掘
我愛看海 看它的千變万化 感受它的溫和與澎湃
然後如詩人般 用心來記錄下當時的感触...
posted by yuki @ 5:20 PM
12 Comments
12 Comments:
2 writers here like to write poem :)
and only one writer here likes to 吹水 :)
hehe... what a funny group... :)
你这个诗写得不错啊。
读了让我有个很舒服的感觉。与海长伴。
謝謝云之彼端●祥龙翱翔的赞赏 ,也很開心听到你的共鸣，但我觉得自己还有好大的进步空间，需要再加把劲罗！
"writing poem" or "吹水"也是一种個人特色嘛!
or maybe "writing poem" is a pretty way to "吹水"? :)
Your Mandarin standard is still very good! Honestly, I cant write poems now.
Continue writing more poems! I enjoy reading it!:)
Thanks for ur kindly support.Because of this comment,i will give my self more try continuously in next time!^^
What a nice peom!!! It makes me feel comfortable and feel like myself is beside the sea after reading!
it's my 1st time to receive 長空無極comment here, thanks for your appreciate, I will work more hard ^0^
yuki, thx for ur appreciate also.
haha...now only i know i m the person who never post comment.....
i also will work hard.....
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